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Now What? (HP George WeasleyXOC)

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It was getting late one night at the Burrow. Harry and Ava had just arrived that morning and would be staying the rest of the summer until Hogwarts started. Harry, Ava, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Fred, and George were sitting around the fire place. The room was buzzing about Quidditch; Mr. Weasley had gotten tickets through the ministry to this year’s world cup. Ron and the twins started an argument about which team they thought was better.
Fred: Well give you that Viktor’s good…
George: But we have 5 sickles that the Irish win
Ron: You’re on
Molly: All right everyone settle down. Now Hermione, Ava I setup the extra cots in Ginny’s room for you two and Harry yours is in Ron’s. I suggest you all get to bed soon; you have an early morning tomorrow. You are meeting Mr. Digory at sunrise to get to the game. Goodnight
All: Night
Nobody could sleep though. They were all too excited for the big game tomorrow. This would be a lot of their first professional games. Eventually one by one everyone went up to bed. Finally it was just Ava and George. They were friends of course, but this may have been the first time they were alone together. They often hung out together with a group. It was silent for a while until Ava finally spoke up.  
Ava: I never really understood Quidditch you know. I mean I would come and watch you guys play but I never understood the rules.
George: Ok so let me think. Here's a simple version. There are of course much more rules and it is much more complicated
Ava: Of course
George: There are 7 players, 3 chasers, 2 beaters, 1 keeper, and 1 seeker. There’s a quaffle that the chaser throw around to get points and the keepers try to stop them. Beaters try and hit the other team with bludgers so they don’t score. And the seeker gets the snitch. Simple enough
Ava: I guess it is. I always wanted to try but I'm not good at riding a broom"
George: that can't be true you’re tiny
Ava: Thanks I think?
George: I mean you'd be nice and light and it would be easy for you to zoom around the other players
As he said this George poked Ava in the side, right in the spot she is ticklish the most.
Ava: George, stop that he he
George: oh.  Look at that I have found someone's weak spot. I think I could have some fun with that.
Ava: No I know what you’re thinking, stop it I'm warning you AHHHHH!
With that George attacked. He grabbed her and started tickling her so hard she couldn't breathe. He continued to chase her around the room till he finally pinned her down on the couch. He leaned over her and tickled even harder.
Ava: George, ha, stop! We're going, ha, to wake, ha, every, ha, one up ha!
He stopped but he was still leaning over her on the couch. They just looked at each other wondering what the other was thinking. And then Ava looked into his eyes. They were a deep blue with a small twinkle only noticeable if one were to stare at them closely. It seemed like forever. Then all of a sudden he leaned in towards her and she felt herself leaning up towards him and in one sweet moment of bliss their lips met. Then suddenly at the same time they were snapped back to reality. Ava pulled back as George sat up. They both realized what just happened. Ava thought to herself: I kissed George Weasley, one of my best friend’s brothers, someone who I had known since first year who has always been a friend to me, a FRIEND, nothing more.
George: uhh... I'm sorry I umm
Ava: ummm no I'm sorry ummm
George: yeah... I... I...I don't know what came over me
Ava: umm yeah... You know it's getting late... I should
George: yeah I should too. You know early morning.
Ava: yeah... Well... Good night
George: night
And just like that Ava bolted upstairs to Ginny's room and straight to bed. She didn't want to think about any of it. She couldn't. What if the others found out? Would George will tell Fred? Would she tell Hermione? Maybe? She need to tell someone or she might explode. But all the while she couldn’t get the kiss out of her head. The way his soft lips felt on hers. How in that moment there was only the two of them. Like the world around them didn’t matter. A part of her wanted to go back down there and kiss him again. She was so confused.

Meanwhile downstairs George watched as she ran up the stairs. He could not believe what he just did. It was his little brother’s friend. He kissed her! But it was amazing. Had she always been that beautiful? He thought back to the day they met on the Hogwarts express. She was just a little first year who bumped into him on the train. She had grown so much since then. Into such a beautiful girl inside and out. Wait he shouldn’t think like this. This is Ron’s friend he is talking about. He shouldn’t, he can’t. What was he going to do? He had really fallen for her. Now he was just lost.
EDIT: Hello all. I know it has been so long this I posted but recently I went back into some of my old stories and did some major editing. First off I changed the POV of the story, then I changed some character names. I hope you all like it and want to get back to writing real soon. 

(I own none of the HP characters)
So here is a little something I was holding onto for a while now. This is my first time posting anything I have written so feel free to give me feed back. I also have some continuations to this story if you like it. 
 
I posted a little continuation to this story if you want to check it out Confusion (Yule Ball story)
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LittleTee's avatar
Interesting story. I think you captured George's personality down and I liked the twin speak you had at the beginning. (Nice touch.)

This is very good for a first fanfiction. There are a few, tiny grammar mistakes here and there, but there aren't too distracting from the story. With time and experience, and maybe with help from a good beta (i.e. someone who reads your story and gives you helpful hints, suggestions and comments to help improve your story), you should be able to over come some grammar related issues. 

Quick question: who is Jenna? I assumed she is your OC, but then again I have just recently joined the Potter fandom so I might be mistaken.